The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows projected locations for a new supermarket for the town of Garlsdon. It has 2 areas planning which are S2 and S1.

The first plan location of S2 is located in the town center. That is good area for consumer. What is more, if the government builds the store in here, this will easy to access by consumers. The next years many visitors will drive vehicle in this area, so the center area has traffic jam.

The second project is about predicting and planning about the supermarket in the future in Garlsdon. S1 is potential area, and near of the main road to the town of Hindon, about 12 kms to the north-west. The area is in rural area and so desired competent to adapt large space parking. This is easy to access between Hindon and Garldson. Another benefit is a potential huge number of people also to access by train or public transportation.

In conclusion, this site is suitable for all the towns, yet the probably offer more benefits for consumer in Cransdon, Hindon and Garldson.

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