The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The line graph illustrates the amount of global water used in Agriculture, Industrial use and Domestic use from 1900 to 2000. In general, there is difference in the consumption among these sectors.
To specify, the amount of global water used in Agriculture was highest with almost 3000 km3 in 100 years. Following that, the amount of global water in Industrial use was lesser nearly 2 times than the amount of those in Agriculture , about 1400 km3 . The lowest amount of global water consumption was about 400 km3 belonged to Domestic use.
Turning to the table , there is a slightly difference in water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000. With 176 milion citizens and 26,500 km2 of irrigated land, Brazilian consumed 359 m3 water per person in 2000. Meanwhile, dramatically lesser than Brazil in population and irrigated land( 5.2 million and 100km2, respectively), Democratic Republic of Congo has only 8 m3 water consumption per person in that year.
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