The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity produced and used in 10 leading countries in the world in 2014.

Overall, it is clear that the electricity produced was far higher than the amount consumed in most countries surveyed. Additionally, China was the leader in manufacturing and consuming electrical power. Units are measured in billion kWh.

The second-ranked country after China was the America, which produced 4099 billion kWh electricity, nearly 1400 billion kWh fewer than China, and used 3856 billion kWh of electrical power while the amount of electricity consumption in China was significantly high, at 5322 billion kWh.

The three following countries were Russia, Japan, and India which the electrical power generated and used varied from nearly 700 billion kWh to 1057 billion kWh. Then, Canada, France, and Brazil produced and consumed generally just a small amount of electrical power. Germany was exceptional for its nearly 56 billion kWh of electricity production more than that of consumption. Finally, the figures for the Republic of Korea were merely below 500 billion kWh.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...electrical power. Units are measured in billion kWh. The second-ranked country after...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4450867052 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83052907029 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.165460026 43.030603864 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184497437234 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119470929042 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693003097112 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141539265345 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756897039744 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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