Below is the chart showing incidence of serious crime in a large UK city from December to November. Total incidences of violent crime are shown in addition to incidences of 4 serious crime types.
The presented line graph outlines the changes in number of four vicious crimes committed by Britain people over 11 months time period.
A glance at the graph reveals that the theft, wild crime and criminal damage almost remained flat over the time period with unnoticeable fluctuations. On the other side, antisocial behavior witnessed increasing trend with sharp ups and downs.
Criminal damage and theft maintained same number throughout the time period. They started with 100 members at starting of December and ended in November with almost same number of approximately 90 and 110 respectively. However, a slight ups and downs were noticed after close observation.
Whereas, wild crime started with 200 member, fall slightly in the month of march and increased to its peaks in the month of August and increased its number by the end of November. And antisocial behavior with 500 decreased in the mid February and saw its peaks in the month of October with fluctuation in between. It fall from October to end of November by approximately 200 members
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 38, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'member' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'members'.
Suggestion: members
... Whereas, wild crime started with 200 member, fall slightly in the month of march an...
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Line 13, column 318, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'falls'?
Suggestion: falls
...October with fluctuation in between. It fall from October to end of November by appr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17341040462 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7085474106 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1517438075 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0671575049306 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279698564774 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296923713797 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453522391849 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198462769277 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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