The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008.

The line graph compares the fluctuations of birth rate in UK among women in different age group during 35-year period, from 1973 to 2008.
Overall, it is evident that in most of age groups, the birth rate decreased, except for 30-35 and 35-39 age group. People aged 25-29 were those having the highest birth rate during that time.
In 1973, the birth rate of those aged 5-29 was 140 per 1000 people, which was higher than that of all the other groups. After som fluctuations in the 1980s and 1990s, these figures fell to 120 per 1000 people in 2008. Having the similar trend, the birth given by women aged 20-25 and under 20 were 125 and 60 per 1000 peole respectively in 1973 and then these figures decline gradually to only 95 and 40 per 1000 people in 2008.
The birth rate of 30-35 age groups increased from 70 to 85 birth per 1000 people during 35 years. These figures of 35-39 age group also rose up, from 40 to 65 per 1000 people in 2008, which was higher than that of under 20 age group. During this time, the number of children borned by women over 40 years old smoothly decreased from 20 to 10 per 1000 peole and remained the lowest among six different groups.

Votes
Average: 7.6 (9 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38532110092 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99321296008 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490825688073 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2535285824 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335429649273 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173866054652 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121224518632 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268204549774 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12452324822 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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