The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps describes the changes of Ryemouth village between 1995 and the current period

In 1995, the entire area was divided into three sections by two main roads. From the far south, there was a fishing port on the sea. Along the sea coast, a fish market and cafe were sitting at the south-west and south-east corner respectively. Opposite to the fish market, a shopping area was built there, whereas a hotel was located in the joint section of two roads. In the north-west section, in which was occupied by housing, with a few houses was located inside the rectangular section. At the far east, t...

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in which was occupied by housing,
in which it was occupied by housing,

in which = where
at which = where

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