summarize the information by selecting uk's city from december to november total incidence of violent crime are shown in addition to incidences of four crime types

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summarize the information by selecting uk's city from december to november total incidence of violent crime are shown in addition to incidences of four crime types

The line graph depicts the crime rates of a major city in United Kingdom over a year's time, from December to the November of next year. The description is based on four serious crimes namely, anti-social behaviour, violent crime, robbery and criminal damage.

At the outset, crimes related to an anti-social demeanor has taken place the most and has been performed by more than 400 criminals throughout the year.The other crimes are committed by people in lesser numbers and has not experienced great change in count in the addressed timeline.

All the categories of crime experienced a slight fall in its number, during the period December to early March.The anti-social crime continued to proliferate over the years with minimal drops in the count at times.It reached a peak of around 650 on October and then started to descend and reached a count of 500 on the month of November. Violent crimes initiated with a crime rate of 200 and showed a steady growth to reach 300 with undulating numbers during the period. The other two crimes did not vary much in the addressed time frame.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... than 400 criminals throughout the year.The other crimes are committed by people in...
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...ring the period December to early March.The anti-social crime continued to prolifer...
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...ith minimal drops in the count at times.It reached a peak of around 650 on October...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89189189189 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55930962203 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.365046683 43.030603864 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.833333333 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214977126544 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120750540256 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456409424542 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157030930398 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731118505584 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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