Dear Emily,
Hope this letter will find you well.
I am writing back to you in response to the questions in your letter.
We all understand the importance of university education to us and our career future. However, as you complained to me, as you studied, you just found that you lost the interest in your major and were not enjoying your internship which was a chance to practice it. You could not be satisfied with what you will learn, although your faculty is offering you the opportunity to study further on master degree, I don’t suggest you pick it up.
As we have been friends for many years, I understand that you are more likely a hands-on girl who is always willing to challenge yourself in a highly competitive environment where you can develop more skills, gain working experience, and learn how to solve the problems that you would never confront at school.
In this case, I suggest you find a graduate-level position in a sophisticated organization in order for you to have many chances to take part in the training courses, workshops, team works, etc.
Anyway, I hope you can overcome the current circumstance about your future and find your own solutions soon.
Have a good one.
Regards,
Jo
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70840537415 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9806720586 44.8134815571 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221122311201 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886743348232 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660948036018 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133765093011 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440536180696 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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