advantages and disadvantages of social media
In recent years, we are living in a world where media plays a crucial role in our lives. While some may think that it has a harmful effect on citizens’ lives, others reckon that it is more likely to have an effective impact. This essay will mirror both standpoints and explain the reasons behind my opinion.
It is true that media has a lot of advantages. Firstly, it is a great source of information. People get the latest news through the media to keep updating the happenings around the world. It also acts as a buffer between the government and the inhabitants. Most of us may not ever meet a prime minister or president but we all know about them by regularly watching television or reading newspaper.
On the other hand, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Many residents now spend hours a day to browse on the Internet to get more information so that they will have something to talk about with their peers. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lacks of sleep, communication and socialization with family and our relatives.
In conclusion, it seems that news media is a useful one but also has some limitations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, so, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72330097087 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70070929753 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665048543689 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4442988348 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108218606256 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390708734055 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492819539003 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638547105523 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240057711004 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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