Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, increasing number of old people are sent to old age homes or nursing homes rather than keeping them at their own homes. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach.
To start with some positives, biggest advantage is old age homes and care homes are better equipped which is beneficial to the elderly. This is because they are physically week and their body doesn’t allow them to do more. For example, hospitals or care homes are designed with stairlifts and elevators to address the mobility problem of a physically challenged person. In contrast, they will not get those facilities at home since most of the houses are not designed to support them. Apart from well equipped, care homes employed trained medical staff. Which will certainly ensure a better treatment in case of any illness and medical emergency. The same is not the case at home.
Nevertheless, it also has problems of staying away from their own home, first is it deprive old people from loved ones. Family members may visit them some time but not always which results in a loneliness environment. Due to the same, it increases the possibility of diseases like depression and also causes a weak immune system. Another significant disadvantage of this is they are always surrounded by people suffering from various illnesses and problems. Unlike with staying with families, it reduces their level of satisfaction and overall happiness in life.
In conclusion, although old aged people are benefited from staying in care homes in terms of better facilities and well versed medical employees to care, it is also important to consider their overall wellbeing and happiness on account of staying away from loved ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08650519031 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60594297823 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3635042876 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250998496406 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852225040376 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573957325528 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157660894324 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033202233158 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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