Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extent do agree or disagree?
It is a heated topic about how to balance between the green areas and construction in urban areas. Some folks argue that more trees plant in open space is more important than construct more buildings in urban areas. Personally, although I agree that trees are necessary for cities and towns, housing is played an important role in such areas.
To begin with, more trees are cultivated in urban areas is beneficial to city dwells in several ways. More tree shade is created if plant more trees in open space, which not only beauty the city but also decrease the city’s temperature in a way. These will encourage city residents to spend more time out of their home and do physical activities under this comfortable atmosphere. Besides, urban air pollution will also benefit from these planting. According to the study from scientists that tree leaves are perfect absorber which especially effects to carbon dioxide and dust.
On the other hand, to take sustainable development in city society in order to promote economic prosperity, the importance of housing cannot be ignored. Affordable housing is one of the living standards among the public. Less housing supply will increase the apartment price which leads to more people to become homeless. Additional, community safety may suffer from the increasing number of homeless result in the rising crime rate. Furthermore, economic development may suffer if only a few building in the CBD area. Less shopping mall, bank, restaurant or other shops will not only impact the financial running but also affect people’ s daily life. Thus, to construct more construction in urban areas is an obvious fact.
In conclusion, it seems like a nice shift to plant more trees or green plants in a city and a town will benefit to people’s health; however, housing also affects people’s lives in many ways particular in CBD area. From the view of my point, I agree with more construction should be build and the importance of how to balance the trees and buildings to make a better living and working environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07871720117 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70616133396 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556851311953 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.323776118 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.470588235 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425958221654 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129906785574 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127954996505 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276458891952 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773803196124 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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