Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way; to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertisement is the tool used by companies to promote their products in the market and nowadays it becomes the part of our lives. Some peoples believe that advertisement have a negative impact on the consumers, but at the same time others think that it helps to identify customer needs. I strongly with the statement that advertisement have a negative influence on people.
Firstly, it is easy to convince the targeted population and give them awareness about the product features and specifications through advertisement. However, nowadays advertisement are used to create unnecessary need. For instance, advertisement create mind set of the housewives that having electric chopper reduce cooking time. However, there is no time saving opportunity of cutting vegetables with chopper instead of knife.
Secondly, low quality can by promoted with the help of advertisement. Nowadays companies are hiring celebrities for the promotion and marketing. Majority of the population are inspired with these stars and start to buy the products even without thinking and understanding the expected benefits. For instance, recently one of the star celebrity of the Bollywood hired for the men’s faire and lovely, the company sell graphs drastically increase because the fans of the Bollywood’s star high in numbers.
In addition to the above, it is fact that advertisement creates false perception in the peoples mind set, especially young generation and women are the victims of these advertisement.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that advertisements are influencing people in a negative way, form the above discussed points are enough to understand that how advertisements can negatively impact people. Creating unnecessary needs, promoting low-quality products and change the attitude of youngsters are the main impacts of bad advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'these advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; these advertisements
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66308243728 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23568777293 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.255763065 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144455386916 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530229132389 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813314056956 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882567961219 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781582923462 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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