Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
There is always a heated debate that what are the most influential factors around the globe. There is a group of people that asserts on the importance of scientist and the impact they have created; whereas the other group is of the view that people are more inspired and inclined towards politicians. This essay will discuss both perspectives in detail before reaching a final verdict.
To embark upon, politicians seems to have more impact on people other than anyone in the world. The evident reason being the developments and transformations they bring in the country. Politicians holds a great responsibility of leading a country and a good politician can destruct or can revolutionized his country with his progressive or destructive approach. For instance, the founder of Pakistan; Mr. Muhammad Ali Jinnah influenced many people to demand for a separate country for Muslims. Millions of people agree to his philosophy and formed Islamic republic of Pakistan back in 1947.
On the contrary, many people argue that there is no greater influence than scientist, based on their out of the box mentality, unique perspective against a common phenomenon and inventions. Scientists poses the power to bring drastic change in our lives. This phenomenon is backed up by a prominent example of the great scientist Mr. Albert Einstein. Millions of people follows his theory of relativity and it is still taught at elementary level across the globe. People have no doubt on his inventions and consider him the father of science.
To summarize the aforementioned, I opine that both professions shares equal power. If politicians are considered to be inspiring, then the consideration and impact of scientist cannot be overlooked. However, I think in future, people will be more inclined towards scientists due to rapid advancements in technology field.
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however, if, look, so, still, then, whereas, for instance, i think, no doubt, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01083840785 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7372967163 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220234561553 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636637785285 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554905475209 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127363592419 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176049375185 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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