Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss the both views and give your own opinion.
Working people spend half their life in the company while doing a job. Certain individuals think that working for the same company for whole their life will benefits more than while working with different company. In my opinion, working with different company, individuals gain more benefits, such as competent skills with current rapidly changing market and high wages.
There are some persons who choose to work whole their life in the same company. According to my view, working with same company gives more job stability. However, most of the time that individual will do same job for many years and will not learn new skills, which will require in today’s competitive world. For instance, my uncle Jim, 55 years old, who is Senior Software engineer, has been working for same organization for last 20 years. He is doing same tasks everyday and because of that he is not up to date with current technology in the market. I believe that person has to up to date with current skills in this world.
Some people like to change their job in 1 or 2 years after working with same company. When individuals change their job, they will be up to date with current technology trend. In addition, jumping to other company, they will get more salary hike than the getting promotion with the same company. For example, my cousin Peter who is also Software engineer is earning more salary than my uncle Jim. Furthermore, he is also learned new technologies while working with different projects in different companies.
In conclusion, working with same company gives more job stability but working with different company give more knowledge to current technology trend which is I believe, required in today’s competitive world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... same company for whole their life will benefits more than while working with different ...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...r last 20 years. He is doing same tasks everyday and because of that he is not up to dat...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king with same company. When individuals change their job, they will be up to dat...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52966342595 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482638888889 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7444046139 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328014250398 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141542949269 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106845016495 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238460297104 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068263624672 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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