We can see more disasters and violence shown on TV. What are its causes and what effects will they exert on the individual and the society?
none of us can refuse the television brings a great source of information including good news and bad ones with a tendency to violence or disasters. Of course, it signifies influence on our life, especially children and teenagers.
As we know, children are so clear-headed that they can repeat any behaviors after observing once or twice. therefore, when watching violent shows a lot, they easily become ruder and have more brutal actions, which is not suitable for their age. According to recent researches, the children who usually contact disasters or violent shows, they will put it into practice and madly solve problems with their friends, which causes deviancy in thoughts or behaviors. For example, when they are playing together in the playground, immediately, another friend snatches their toys, they will attack that friend to regain it by hitting, biting or clawing. it can lead to scratches or bleeding. Thus, children should be taken care of a lot and limited to watch violent programmes on television.
teenagers are objects influenced by these shows because they have an imperious temperament and want to show themselves. Hence, they easily actualized some rude behaviors on TV and they think that is a wonderful thing to express their characters, but it is peril and makes the behave violently even commit a crime. For instance, today, the school violence situation happens a lot because more and more students have excessive behaviors in dealing with contradictions such as using knives, scissors to attack their friends because they imitate fighting videos on television. that is one of the reasons why the rate of adolescent crime has increased in recent time.
In brief, everything has many sides influencing on our life, especially media, therefore when watching any programmers, we should choose carefully content to avoid negative effects. besides, children and teenagers need to be under control to watch shows to keep up good habits and remove negative thoughts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in brief, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26645768025 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74929315063 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611285266458 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5998246171 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147408299414 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464942994446 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355735944288 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756159129329 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047143901686 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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