Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a women’s role should be limited to taking care of house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why. Include specific example and details.
Women’s freedom and rights has always been in the heat of debate throughout the generations. Though some people argues that women should be allowed to pursue their career of interest, majority of people are against this and say that women are meant to take care of their family. This essay will discuss on the opinion why women should be given equal opportunity in the society.
To begin with, these days we can see women in all sectors of industry. Though the percentage is less, women have made their career in various men dominated sectors like astronomy, politics and armed forces. A study says that women are more inclined to adhere to the standards and policies of the tasks assigned to them which in turn help them to progress in their work. Thus, we can say that women are also efficient as men in these sectors.
Moreover, working women also gain to invest more on their children’s education and self-development. This is because of the additional income which helps parents to send their children to extra-curricular classes and private schools. A recent survey in India, has shown that both working parents contribute almost fifty percent of their income towards the children’s education and also the children’s of working mothers are found to become self-independent early when compared to other children.F from this it is clear that women facilitate good parenting.
These essays discussed on women are equally as efficient as men and those who have jobs are also good parents in enabling the self-development of their children. Hence, in my opinion, women should be given an equal opportunity at work and gender inequality should be discouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14181818182 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92472164389 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6462920886 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367245483122 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139885545791 0.0925447433944 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089341130149 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234362239505 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882816293737 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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