The bar chart illustrates how much time children aged 0-9 spend with their mothers and fathers on weekdays and the weekends.
Overall, children tend to spend more time with their moms on weekdays but with both moms and dads on the weekends. However, moms still stay closest to the children all the time.
On weekdays, children use about 70% of their time with moms but only around 1-2 hours with dads. Additionally, children who are 8-9 years old spend the largest amount of time (over 9 hours per day) with their parents while children who are 2-5 years old spend the lowest amount, at about 8.5 hours.
On the weekends, children are prone to be with both of their parents as they spend about 4-6 hours with moms and dads, which account for about 50-60% of their daytime. Besides, kids aged 4-5 spend more time (over 10 hours) with their parents while those who are 0-1 year old spend the lowest amount of time (under 9 hours) compared to other 4 age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y closest to the children all the time. On weekdays, children use about 70% of t...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...hours with dads. Additionally, children who are 8-9 years old spend the largest amount ...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...r day with their parents while children who are 2-5 years old spend the lowest amount, ...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...10 hours with their parents while those who are 0-1 year old spend the lowest amount of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54335260116 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02191541265 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508670520231 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8893967567 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491907134736 0.215688989381 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267748775823 0.103423049105 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712816711441 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336603206279 0.15604864568 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070127657566 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.