The diagram below shows the process of making cheese.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given process illustrates the procedure for recycling bottles made of plastic.
Overall, there are 9 steps in the process, beginning with discarding bottles in waste baskets and finishing with manufacturing finished products. It is also noticeable that the entire process is repetitive.
In the beginning, wasted bottles are thrown into designated bins for recycling. Then they are transported to the recycling center by a big truck. After being placed in the recycling point, they undergo a sorting step into two categories: recyclables and non-recyclables. Next the bottles are compressed into large cubic blocks and later crushed by two major wheels to become small bits, being thoroughly washed.
In the sixth step of the process, the tiny pieces of plastic are placed into a big machine to make plastic pellets. Then they are heated at a high temperature to become raw materials for various products. Next the raw materials are tied, packed and put on a platform, ready to be transferred to factories. Different kinds of products are made from the original materials, such as containers, clothes, pencils and bags. After being used, the products are discarded into recycling bins and the process repeats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28350515464 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86429621271 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4967241162 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4166666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0553247761643 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224660102293 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314745306208 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383841633823 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232809840516 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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