Some people believe that violent films are bad for you and encourage people to be violent. Others argue that violence and films are unrelated because violence existed before films. Which of these opinions do you agree with, and to what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
The modernity in source of entertainment has led to a genre of it being one of the most domninant the visual entertainment. Yet some people think movies with a more crude message influences unhumane behaviours in people today also some refute the state the statement by presenting violence has a long history even before such films were made. In my perspective i firmly agree to the statement
To commence with foremost, there are no proven relations that depicts violent scripted films encourage, such behaviour. Also, a study in japan has provided that there is no influence on human because of seeing violent visiual entertainments. It is solely based on one's mental health or a condition which demands violence. Although, if taken a close look to this there were films in the era of world war , which delivered messages of keeping up hope although being pretty violent in their scripts visiuals and even showing post war destruction but that did not promote violence. Whereas, it gave wind to the thought of hope in one's nature.
However, there are also a lot of movies true stories showing how violent that person's job requires them to be, yet still inspiring and portraing a good message. An example to be taken in account, movie american sniper a true story of how an marine soldier deployed in during afghanistan war zone. His work demanded him to kill , which he also did proficiently but with a stone on his heart. Another example can be take as a movie of hacksaw ridge, a true story filled with immense disturbing violent events yet a young soldier who insisted to fight a war without a gun! ends up saving hundreds of soldiers at the end sending a brave text.
Agglomerating, above mentioned facts it can be clearly understood that even the worse crime and violent filled movies do not inspire violence it simply is a creation of one's own mind theories.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8198757764 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67143492305 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611801242236 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4916435154 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196627163791 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063109120759 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504576703525 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118448791777 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397587402947 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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