The graph shows seasonal water consumption in four towns.( rewrite-alam)
Given is the line chart revealing the amount of water consumed by inhabitants in the four differnt cities per season in subtropic areas.
Overall, all cities experience a predictible fluctuation in which city C declared as the highest water consumer in all season excluding in the autumn. On the other hand, town D which is at the lowest grade constantly stood at that position a whole year. A more detailed look at the graph illustrates that rainfall happens unequally in each city during the period of time.
Town D which levels at 25 points in the summer dips by just under 15 to approximately 10 points in the autumn and generally drops before climbs to slightly 16 points. The quite same trend is shown by town A which starts at 46, on average, until stood at 39 points. While water consumption in town B fluctuates slightly, it still seems like stable enough compared to other cities. Conversely, town C which leads all other cities in the summer, winter, and spring slumps to the lowest rank in the autumn, 11 points, on average.
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Sentence: Given is the line chart revealing the amount of water consumed by inhabitants in the four differnt cities per season in subtropic areas.
Error: differnt Suggestion: different
Sentence: Overall, all cities experience a predictible fluctuation in which city C declared as the highest water consumer in all season excluding in the autumn.
Error: predictible Suggestion: predictable
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