Leaders are born naturally and can not learn to be leaders. Do you agree or disagree with this?
leadership is a skill which involves leading ourselves and other in a particular direction. And a person chosen to fulfill this task is termed to be a leader. he/She is expected to have immense knowledge in the path chosen to lead and must have huge courage to face any difficulties in the journey. Another trait of a leader is patience. A leader must be very patient with his/her peers, and help them overcome their weaknesses.
No, I do not agree that leadership comes naturally. I believe it is the circumstances and situations that a person is facing makes him/her a leader. if leadership were to come naturally, then the current leaders' offsprings will always take over them. but that's not the situation always. A person whomsoever might be, can not be a leader just because he is son of a leader. For example, during the rule of the british in the india which lasted for about 200 years, if Mahatma Gandhi would not rise up against the british then the freedom for india would have never been possible. he is great scholar in Law and had opportunity to settle abroad. but he has seen the suffering of the Indian people under british, and decided to come back to country to achieve freedom. Thus, he started fighting for the freedom and initiated incredible movements like the salt satyagraha and dandi march to show resistence. Gandhi was not born as leader nor a son of leader. it the circumstance that he had faced in his life and his strong desire to see people of india have made him a great leader of the history.
leading is very arduous job and needs lots of skills and mastery, which can not achieved in a day or two.it needs continuous efforts and dedication.Although it is true that nature teaches a person everything, even how to be a leader. but it is quite vague to say that leadership comes naturally, as nature gives equal opputunities to all. if leaders were to become naturally, then everyone would be a leaders. but that's not a case, we can clearly see only few among us become true leaders. And that's because only those few people know how to utilise their resources in a manner to help for the benefit of the society.
Thats why leaders learn to become leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62564102564 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63380266958 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520512820513 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9906602847 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250220349591 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744933284751 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748946158231 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161060686131 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304132094452 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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