People generally know that the environment is important. Howecer, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?
It is general knowledge that the environment is of great importance for humans' lives. Nonetheless, the majority of residents do not have environmental conscience and have done little to preserve the environment. My essay will elucidate the motivations behind this behavior and suggest posibble measures to spur people into environmental protection.
To begin with, there are many factors inducing people to neglect environmental protection. One element must be the illusion that environmnetal problems are a non-existent and exaggerated matter. Although many pressing environmental issues like climate change or global warming have become rife in many places worldwide, several people, even those who have high social status, are still oblivious or disbelieve the dire consequences of such problems. For example, Donald Trump, the former president of the USA, once asserted that he did not believe in the occurence of climate change and its implications. Further, some, though aware of envuronmental threats, view environmental protetcion as too complicated a matter for individuals to handle on their own. Since almost every nation incurs at least one problem regarding the environment, plentiful people feel hopeless when it comes to alleviating environmental issues. In fact, they contend that the cooperation of multiple countries is the only and the key measure for such issues. Thus, people's misconceptions about environmental problems are the major elements impeding environmental protection.
In order to enhance people's enthusiasm for environmental protection, there are multiplide methods for environmentalists and the authorities to implemment.. Firirstly. activists should spearhead campaigns to raise people's awareness of environmnetal protection. It is advisable to organize public conference and meetings to disseminate information about current environmental issues among the general populous. By doing so, individuals are likely to develop environmental conscience and be more willing to take actions. Secondly, the government ought to lauch policies supporting the use of energy-efficient products. For instance, political leaders should consider reducing taxes on eco-sound devices and goods to encourage consumers to purchase them. This measure is bound to make citizens realize that they are able to make contribution to preserving the environment. Hence, the admistration and environmentalists evidently have several methods to make people more responsible of protecting the environment.
In conclusion, it is my standpoint that individuals might be motivated to diminish environmental issues by several ways, though their pseudo-thoughts about such matters may induce them to overlook their responsibilities. I hope that all of the Earth's residents will become aware of how urgent environental protection is and take measures to protect our planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Activists
... authorities to implemment.. Firirstly. activists should spearhead campaigns to raise peo...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2467.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95893719807 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41669975206 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596618357488 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3637092565 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.476190476 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170635075738 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052144404352 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469370911216 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110229260739 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351806074181 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.