Some people say history is one of the most important School subject other people think in today's world subject like science and technology are more important than history discuss both the view and give your opinion.
in this concurrent world.it is undoubtedly true that education is very important for development. some people concut that history subject is very important for students.however others quibble from them and propound that nowadays morden subjects such as science and technology are more important than history.tjis essay will further elaborate my reasons for the some in my upcoming paragraphs which will lead to logical conclusion.
there are adequate evidence of this view which are substantial the notch concrete reason is when the pupils learn more history subjects. than they only get a knowledge of things that have been done in past . it is not good for future. another pivotal aspect is they did not get a knowledge of morden subjects or morden technology so that it is big drawback of there career . thus. it is clear that history subject is important but not most important in this technological world.
what is half full some, may appear half empty to other so, people in general tend to distinguish that science and technology subject is more important than the history subject.so that half of other population think that morden subjects like science and technology is best for students because nowadays in this technological world students must have a information about new innovation and morden things so that they can complete with this modernisation word so it is advantageous for them in future.
in closer it is conclude that nowadays it is very important to get a knowledge of morden subjects.in my opinion it is most important because in this development world this is very important to walk with equal so that this subjects are more important than the history subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, thus, in general, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12274368231 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84326776448 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472924187726 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.900428538 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.666666667 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391316165493 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16622070169 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133892714143 0.0667982634062 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262731929158 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019358283777 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.