The world being a global village
Culture refers to the common way of life of a particular group of people depending on their topographical location. With the introduction of technology in the numerous aspects of life be it education, health, fashion, agriculture , communication, the world is now getting smaller not in terms of size but in reference to no more barriers in terms of accessibility. This explains the saying that the world of today is more or less a global village.The use of village in this context is used to depict small community in the early 1990's that had a group of people who were easily identified with their mode of life; the way they dress, walk, talk and customs being similar.
In the past where there were not efficient means of travelling, people barely moved across the globe thus every country had its own culture in terms of clothing, languages, food etc. The introduction of better planes which enables anyone to travel from one part of the world to another has greatly influenced culture as a whole. For example in every big city the original culture of that country is being transformed into some sort of single -international culture .Take for instance New York in the United States as at now has a population of about nine million people of whom not more than 50% are actual American natives.Its a mixture of people from Asia, Europe ,Africa and other continents all coming from areas of different cultures and now trying to merge to form one international culture. Service facilities like restaurants, bars which use to serve food and drinks of american culture are now adding international menus . Restaurant brand names such as Mc Donald's , K.F.C , Starbucks are now internationally known names when it comes to food services.
Regardless of which language your mother tongue is. The most common second language adopted is English, then it comes to French or Spanish. Communication services are now more efficient because of technology. Businesses in United Kingdom can have clients in France. It is also very common for business partners of a firm to come from different parts of the world and link up for conferences remotely using services such as skype, webbex and other means. Networking and connectivity has no boundaries therefore it is now not a recommendation but a necessity to learn a common tongue or language. For example Many countries have added one or more languages to their educational curriculum so students would develop new language skills in addition to their local languages , to be able to communicate on the global level.
Fashion now trends globally,common style of dresses runs through most parts of the world. This is because fashion Companies are now able to advertise on a global scale with the help of social media via the internet. The release of iphone 7 in the U.S.A does not mean it would only be bought in U.S.A . They have branches all over the world that would equally sell .The transition from the 3 button suits to the 2 button suit and gradually to 1 is being noticed internationally. The wearing of suit is something that originated from the western culture, but as of today is a common type of formal wear by people from all corners of the earth.The change of currency to Euro in Europe (except the U.K) and dollar in U.S.A , Canada and Australia says it all. Affluent shops in other countries accept the dollar or even charge their commodities in foreign currency such as the dollar
The world is gradually evolving into one big culture. All the separate cultures are now synchronizing into one big culture and this is because of technology which has helped to improve accessibility, network, communication, transforming the previous huge world of 7 distinct continents into a global village.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'sort of', 'such as', 'more or less']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290132547865 0.240241500013 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.125184094256 0.157235817809 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0957290132548 0.0880659088768 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515463917526 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0235640648012 0.0444667217837 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147275405007 0.12292977631 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0353460972018 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8544452219 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0309278350515 0.030933414821 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00147275405007 0.0016655270985 88% => OK
Determiners: 0.0913107511046 0.0997080785238 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00589101620029 0.0249443105267 24% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0162002945508 0.0148568991511 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3754.0 2732.02544248 137% => OK
No of words: 637.0 452.878318584 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89324960754 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02382911018 4.58838876751 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34693877551 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244897959184 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172684458399 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116169544741 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8544452219 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 321.0 219.290929204 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503924646782 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 64.0060704007 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 28.9545454545 23.380412469 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.9631471964 59.4972553346 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.636363636 141.124799967 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9545454545 23.380412469 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.21349557522 460% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.4443413729 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.36029411765 1.64882698954 143% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261507155427 0.391690518653 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117868817822 0.123202303941 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0855998417333 0.077325440228 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540395288623 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19233933018 0.149214159877 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102032129198 0.161403998019 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932447847324 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.407346798726 0.385218514788 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0493445029231 0.0692045440612 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19860068924 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863542911919 0.0653680567796 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.