The author argues that limiting the mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents, depending on a neighbor Island results when the council enforced similar limits on moped rentals. While reducing moped rental might reduce the annual accidents in the island, the author's argument is rife with holes and assumptions.
First, the writer implies that the increase of the population in summer promote moped's accidents rate, but there is no clear evidence to support this assumption. Furthermore, he stated that the population increases to 100,000 without stating the rate of increase or the number of the population before summer. Thus, many questions should be asked to verify the relation between the population increase and the number of accidents. Such as, what is the population increase rate? , what is the number of the mopeds' accidents during summer? and is there a correlation between the rate of accidents in summer and the population increase rate?
The writer suggests that limiting the number of mopeds' rental to 25 instead of 50 will consequently decrease the annual accidents to 50% is not valid. If we assume that limiting the rental will check 50 percent of the accidents in summer, will this reduce annual accidents rate into 50%? how about the rest of the year?. Moreover, the author does not effectively show the connection of the moped rental and the accidents, many residents may own mopeds since the author stated it is a popular form of transportation on the island.
Also, the writer built his argument on other island's approach of similar of enforcing the same limits on moped's rental without giving any points of comparison between the two islands to strengthen his argument. For example, the author would indicate that the two islands have close population numbers, which increase at almost the same rates during summer due to terrorists.
In conclusion, while it might be true that limiting the mopeds' rental in summer would dramatically reduce the accidents rate in the island, the town council of Balmer Island would benefit from implementing more investigation on the causes of the accidents to enforce more effective laws.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not exactly. better to say: maybe there are other reasons caused the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents on the neighboring island of Seaville. not due to the limitation on the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season.
argument 2 -- not OK. it is valid since the neighboring island of Seaville has reached it. we may argue like:
it works for A, but it doesn't mean it will work for B.
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 373 350
No. of Characters: 1868 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.395 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.008 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.574 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 159 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.349 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.917 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.449 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.73 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.218 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...es from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season will attain the 50 percent annual reduc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...the annual accidents in the island, the authors argument is rife with holes and assumpt...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., what is the population increase rate? , what is the number of the mopeds accide...
^
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... of the mopeds accidents during summer? and is there a correlation between the rate...
^^^
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
... reduce annual accidents rate into 50%? how about the rest of the year?. Moreover, ...
^^^
Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cidents to enforce more effective laws.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 373.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13941018767 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62395933135 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458445040214 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.005087549 57.8364921388 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.70786347227 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429463156792 0.218282227539 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153176387191 0.0743258471296 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745773036121 0.0701772020484 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238614823684 0.128457276422 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446597024318 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 12.3882235529 137% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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