In this memo, the in concludes that Omega University should eliminate the procedure of student evaluation of professors in
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254174397032 0.25644967241 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.133580705009 0.15541462614 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0723562152134 0.0836205057962 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612244897959 0.0520304965353 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408163265306 0.0272364105082 150% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128014842301 0.125424944231 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0315398886827 0.0416121511921 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08722893155 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0222634508349 0.026700313972 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00556586270872 0.001811407834 307% => OK
Determiners: 0.122448979592 0.113004496875 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.0255425247493 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00556586270872 0.0127820249294 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3075.0 2731.13054187 113% => OK
No of words: 478.0 446.07635468 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43305439331 6.12365571057 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.57801047555 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403765690377 0.378187486979 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.338912133891 0.287650121315 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234309623431 0.208842608468 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1589958159 0.135150697306 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08722893155 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 207.018472906 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456066945607 0.469332199767 97% => OK
Word variations: 51.5053853175 52.1807786196 99% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.039408867 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1578947368 23.2022227129 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2871201368 57.7814097925 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.842105263 141.986410481 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1578947368 23.2022227129 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.724660767414 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.58251231527 0% => OK
Readability: 59.049108126 51.9672348444 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.75590551181 1.8405768891 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333827238646 0.441005458295 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124249675932 0.135418324435 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0831737635503 0.0829849096947 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559714635959 0.58762219726 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197216027651 0.147661913831 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147754288307 0.193483328276 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792459506812 0.0970749176394 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.512790017754 0.42659136922 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0602149569204 0.0774707102158 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255114468546 0.312017818177 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042541555665 0.0698173142475 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.33743842365 120% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 6.46551724138 155% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 5.36822660099 130% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 14.657635468 130% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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