The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The Balmer island council adduces that by circumscribing the number of rented mopeds to 25 in the island, it will reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians by half because the same policy was adopted in a town in the vicinity and such outcome was achieved. At a first glance, the deduction made by the council would sound plausible due to the fact that both towns are nearly located, thereby they possibly share some visitors. However, scrutinizing the assumptions, there are questions that need to be answered before reaching the conclusion made.
First of all, it is not mentioned in the letter the rate of accidents in other seasons of the years, when the island is not expecting to receive tourists and the population is smaller. Maybe the accidents occur all over the year and they are not directly related to the arrival of those new comers in the summer. Thus, if this can be verified, limiting the quantity of rentals only in the summer may not produce the expected result. The amount of accidents may decrease but ata rate not as high as alleged.
Second, just because the adoption a policy to reduce the number of rentals in one town was successful, it is not garanteed that aplying that for other communities will reach the same goal. Perhaps the former is a small village where people can access places by foot and the shortage of avaliable mopeds to rent would not lead people to look for alternative forms of commuting. On the Balmer island, conversely, if the region is voluminous, people may be forced to seek for other kinds of transportation to move around the territory, this could, actually increase the number accidents, including the ones involving mopeds, pedestrians and, let’s say, a car. Therefore, the topological characteristics of the islands should be also described by the author to support its assumptions.
Last but not least, even if the number of accidents reduces after more stringent rule for renting a moped, it can not be assured that the number of accidents will diminish in the same rate as the number of rentals. Suppose, for instance, that half of those accidents were caused by just one bad driver. Even if the rentals are more restrained, the council cannot garantee that such conductor will not be able to keep renting mopeds. So, the accidents may, as well as previously described, rise. Obviously, they could eventually reduce if the rentals are more spread among renters, but hardly they will fall 50 percent. For that reason, the author should have given more details about the distribution of accidents by rentals.
In conclusion, the letter uses the sucessful results obtained by a neighbor town regarding accidents between mopeds and pedestrians to make deductions about the outcomes of applying a similar policy in the Balmer island. If fails, conversely, to provide essencial details that are essencial to buttress that conclusion. Some of them, as discussed previously, could not only digress the original goal, but also they could provoke the opposite upshot.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 508 350
No. of Characters: 2469 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.748 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.86 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.591 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 190 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.557 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.85 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.288 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.9520958084 170% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2550.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 508.0 441.139720559 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01968503937 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69874351624 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 204.123752495 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498031496063 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 791.1 705.55239521 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1481806761 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 23.324526521 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 5.70786347227 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218728563277 0.218282227539 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574386080436 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063531914909 0.0701772020484 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120316138155 0.128457276422 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307885026478 0.0628817314937 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 98.500998004 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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