Such as purchase products, which is to air the film was made 200 consumer's involvement. According to the open letter to the Editor of Journal in the issues of the environmental, that it may persuade consumers to buy, they do not want the property to the author of 300, so that the atmosphere of natural disasters. Regarding the argument of others hoping to treatment, the author reports that copper mining pollution on earth and will cause dangerous threats to the species of animal. To use the slope and base with 300 aerial protecting the environment in any way benefit the doubt that is covered by the unaddressed and assumptions.
First of all, the author takes acquired unjustly because they used to be 300 Cooper metals. In order that, in such a case being shared by several others in the use of the ground: and the knowledge of the work of the Senate, I have come to fully early in the morning. On the other hand, this country can be useful for many other purposes, such as research center and headquarters building or constructing storage. In addition, it is possible that, in order to purchase 300 ground on investment when it has a selling price increases in the future. In this case, no is a negative one, as we can not know where.
Even in countries without necessarily mining mining belief natural calamity. Is a violent threat can be eliminated, if the environment of the institution is an innovative environmental friendly to use, and strictly follow the rule of the equipment 300. In addition, he threatened not: but delivered himself to the bottom along, however, should be given to this multitude that does not exist in the acceptance of a species of animal. Fredonia is in the house of his life to dangers, however, from a number of the West, which is a species of an animal, but the things that has acquired the 200 species of the places and the lands of them all? Fredonia probably going down and 300 is only a small portion of the earth, places, and I would still have sufficient discrimination animals to survive. Perhaps it might be the risk of this action, and animals will be very, so that their relative value has a dig in the mines of brass:. The author of the causes that provides the things that be right, but a lot of the 300, to the Assumption of the disaster that there can not be.
This debt makes sense, if they could find themselves readily to substitute the 300's atmosphere. Of course, if I may, together with the 300 down by means of the people who provide them with the air: and so the settings of the normal. Many other things can cause damage to the machine by means of factors. In fact, from that time he was able to the detriment of global warming, overhunting, overexploitation of natural resources, and the rest would be vain to simply one factor does not matter. If the way, the brass of the mines, the smallest of the natural disaster, so they know the cause of more than to run the risk of loss would be more advantageous for overhunting is the beauty of the hunt, the purchase, and will come from attempting to violate a lot 300 provided with the laws shall be of brass. What's more, when the majority of the 200 income from big companies or cooperation to be exported to other countries, for individual purchases they should also be such that the lawyer will not be meaningful. In such a case, it can be a great benefit is 300, and so do not need to do is to promise, too, the pain of the actions. Therefore, if the arguments are fixed firmly established around the metal is mined in severity.
Finally, the conclusion is that it is not reasonable to believe that the assumptions ed reduce overall design would have been more powerful. Furthermore, to strengthen the need commendatory, author of the book, we should, according to what follows: First, whether the case is a negative impact on the environment, and 300, in the second, whether it is out of the utter destruction of the consumer products, do not this to be done is not added to the normal life of acquiring 300 and the charge of the air; Finally, if this will be a better environmental health policy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... increases in the future. In this case, no is a negative one, as we can not know w...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: mining
... Even in countries without necessarily mining mining belief natural calamity. Is a violent t...
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Line 7, column 805, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ovided with the laws shall be of brass. Whats more, when the majority of the 200 inco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in fact, of course, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.6327345309 204% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.9520958084 193% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 28.8173652695 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 116.0 55.5748502994 209% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3385.0 2260.96107784 150% => OK
No of words: 740.0 441.139720559 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57432432432 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.21564387372 4.56307096286 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.682008272 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 341.0 204.123752495 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460810810811 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1048.5 705.55239521 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.70958083832 406% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.67365269461 538% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 20.0 4.22255489022 474% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4955910088 57.8364921388 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.192307692 119.503703932 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.70786347227 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0830232413757 0.218282227539 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024594651765 0.0743258471296 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232959841716 0.0701772020484 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052651282222 0.128457276422 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260110190174 0.0628817314937 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.3550499002 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.197005988 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.5979740519 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 98.500998004 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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