The following appeared in a memo from New Ventures Consulting to the president of HobCo, Inc., a chain of hobby shops."Our team has completed its research on suitable building sites for a new HobCo hobby Shop in the city of Grilldon. We discovered that th

For GRE essays, we need to analyze the structure of the statement and argue accordingly:

When our researchers conducted a poll of area residents, 88 percent of those who responded indicated that they would welcome the opening of a hobby shop in southeastern Grilldon. //yes, people welcome hobby shops, but how is the price of the hobby shop and how is the economic condition of the area? if the store is expensive, people will not shop there.

Grilldon is in a region of the nation in which the hobby business has increased by 300 percent during the past decade. //maybe Grilldon is an exception of the nation.

In addition, Grilldon has a very large population of retirees, a demographic with ample time to devote to hobbies. //'ample time' is not equal to 'desire or wish to do'.

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