This memo by the president of Bower Builder who are in interior designing field to his employees. It in memo he tell his desginers that now-a -days customers need large family room and well appointed kitchen. He had made the conclusion based on a nationwide survey and the increase in one of his competitors Domus Construction who provide such design. The president of the companys ask his designer to sacirfice the dining area as no customers in now-a-days seperate dining room. The president here has made number of assumptions before making this conclusion which can result in unwanted consequences.
Firstly, The president states that based on a nationwide survey the people desire to have large family room and kitchen. But he failed to mention that the survey targeted which kind of people and which area in particular. As we all know that the desire of perfect house of people is highly influenced by the area they live and the social status. So the president should first make sure that survey targeted same kind of people as their customers. If their customers as not from the targeted people than they might don't like the design.
Secondly, President assumed that the significant increase in the sales of his competitor Domus Construction is just because their design provides large family room and kitchen. There can be number of reasons why the custormer choose Domus construction. Like one of reason might he is providing many more things in his design which the company is not able to provide. There can be considerable difference in charges of Domus contructions and Bower Builder. So the President should consider all aspect before making such assumptions.
Mainly, I feel that designers should design the house based on the requirement of that customer in particular instead of any survey. Requirement of their house differs from person to person based on the one's use. So the president should not believe on any these survey and ask his designer to design based on customers requirement. He should find out the other reason Domus Constructions is better than his company. Then, he should make efforts to make his company better and increase the sales.
Thus the president should consider all the aspects above before instructing his designers. Instructing the desginers in wrong ways may be perennial to the company. So he should think of people targeted in the survey an factors making Domus Construction better. Increasing sales of any company can be easily done if proper research is done.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'i feel', 'in particular', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276404494382 0.25644967241 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.150561797753 0.15541462614 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0629213483146 0.0836205057962 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0359550561798 0.0520304965353 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0584269662921 0.0272364105082 215% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.14606741573 0.125424944231 116% => OK
Participles: 0.047191011236 0.0416121511921 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68352288588 2.79052419416 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0202247191011 0.026700313972 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00224719101124 0.001811407834 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.101123595506 0.113004496875 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0337078651685 0.0255425247493 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157303370787 0.0127820249294 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2708.0 2731.13054187 99% => OK
No of words: 417.0 446.07635468 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.49400479616 6.12365571057 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381294964029 0.378187486979 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247002398082 0.287650121315 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191846522782 0.208842608468 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129496402878 0.135150697306 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68352288588 2.79052419416 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 207.018472906 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446043165468 0.469332199767 95% => OK
Word variations: 48.0374588728 52.1807786196 92% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.039408867 120% => OK
Sentence length: 17.375 23.2022227129 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9962604148 57.7814097925 45% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 141.986410481 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 23.2022227129 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.724660767414 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.58251231527 419% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.0752398082 51.9672348444 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.91743119266 1.8405768891 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434753371014 0.441005458295 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115846689082 0.135418324435 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0780400594557 0.0829849096947 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525909445956 0.58762219726 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0913881982562 0.147661913831 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171075775375 0.193483328276 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749778094042 0.0970749176394 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382705525596 0.42659136922 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0182661912483 0.0774707102158 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303518038587 0.312017818177 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063837066371 0.0698173142475 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.33743842365 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.82512315271 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 6.46551724138 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 14.657635468 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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