The author has made many unwarrentd assumption in the argument. The argument given by the author will fail if any of these assumption do not comply with author's thought.
First, the author is trying to suggest a plan which will decrease the traffic but does not mention the major traffic areas. The plan to build a multi -million dollar subway which will run through major downtown areas may help to lessen thetraffic in the downtown area but one can not claim about the whole Briggsville's notorious congestion. If the route of the subway is not congruous with the traffic route then the claim of having improvement in economy will be held wrong.
Furthermore, the Briggsville's citizen do not prefer to travel through the bus because of the safety issues and the inconsitencies. Which means, they prefer to travel through their own vehicle or may be by rental cars. The arguments fails to provide any such claim that the subway will have some safety guidelines to encourage people to use subway. If there is no such rules for one's saftey, people will not use subway for their commute, which shows that the problem of congestion will not solved and hence no improvement in the economy.
Finally, the argument does mention that the subway will be available for 24- hours a day which will run through the downtown area. If i consider all the previous assumption are true and people are travelling with subway, the author fails to tell the total time these commuters spend to reach their destination. The route designed by the Mayor may not be the best route to reach one's destination in least time. Since the arguments concludes that if motorists will spend less time in traffic, the economy will improve but the argument does not mention the decrease in the total time of travel of a commuter.
In the end, there are many unwarrented assumption that author has preassumed. To make the plan success, the author needs to work these above forementioned assumption. The argument will fail miserably, if any one of these assumptions do not hold true.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The author has made many unwarrentd assumption in the argument.
Error: unwarrentd Suggestion: underwent
Sentence: The plan to build a multi -million dollar subway which will run through major downtown areas may help to lessen thetraffic in the downtown area but one can not claim about the whole Briggsville's notorious congestion.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: thetraffic Suggestion: traffic
Sentence: Furthermore, the Briggsville's citizen do not prefer to travel through the bus because of the safety issues and the inconsitencies.
Error: inconsitencies Suggestion: inconsistencies
Sentence: If there is no such rules for one's saftey, people will not use subway for their commute, which shows that the problem of congestion will not solved and hence no improvement in the economy.
Error: saftey Suggestion: safety
Sentence: In the end, there are many unwarrented assumption that author has preassumed.
Error: preassumed Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: unwarrented Suggestion: unwanted
Sentence: To make the plan success, the author needs to work these above forementioned assumption.
Error: forementioned Suggestion: No alternate word
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flaws:
Need to argue against the conclusion always. For this topic it is:
Since motorists will spend less time in traffic, Mayor Harrison Smith Jones expects to see an immediate increase in worker productivity, which will improve the economy of Briggsville.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 351 350
No. of Characters: 1665 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.328 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.744 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.482 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.798 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this assumption' or 'these assumptions'?
Suggestion: this assumption; these assumptions
...given by the author will fail if any of these assumption do not comply with authors thought. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hole Briggsvilles notorious congestion. If the route of the subway is not congruou...
^^
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'fail'.
Suggestion: fail
...or may be by rental cars. The arguments fails to provide any such claim that the subw...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...that the problem of congestion will not solved and hence no improvement in the economy...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... will run through the downtown area. If i consider all the previous assumption ar...
^
Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ayor may not be the best route to reach ones destination in least time. Since the ar...
^^^^
Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
... In the end, there are many unwarrented assumption that author has preassumed. To make the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 351.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85754985755 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54732402108 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458689458689 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7995535692 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5625 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17367192036 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592305450184 0.0743258471296 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05429645513 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954036062333 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741981141897 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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