The argument tells about the benefit of Acme company based on Easy Read course. There are mainly 3 stated or unstated assumptions based on which the recommendation from personnel director is written. These assumptions are mainly relied on the effects on workers ability to perform for the company.
First, the article impose that 'One graduate of the course was able to read a 500-page report in only two hours'. But, there is no evidence about the graduate read ability without the course, which fails to certify that the course is liable for increasing read ability. The graduate who has not taken the course may have read ability than the course taken graduate.
Hence, this assumption is flawed to support the author's claim.
Second, the article ascribe the gain of one graduate from assistant manager to vice president, which is the impact of the course. But, to reach vice president from assistant manager does not only depends on read ability. There could be many several factors which can affect one graduate work position. Such as, overall performance of the graduate, experience or skill of the graduate or is the graduate is capable for that position or not. Hence, the personnel director fails to give this case as an example on the counter of company's effect on the course.
Third, in the article it is said that, the information absorb ability depends on faster read ability. Albeit, it is not always true that if one person's ability of information absorb is high, he will be more dependable to support his company's benefit. Not only information absorb ability but also some other factors like employees technical ability, handling tough situation, management the team etc.
In the conclusion, the assumption made by the author is questionable, because he fails to provide appropriate support for his assumptions on company's benefit through taking the course. The author should provide more valid and dependable information which can provide additional support for his made assumption.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 327 350
No. of Characters: 1637 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.252 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.006 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.545 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.857 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.612 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...ons are mainly relied on the effects on workers ability to perform for the company. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 197, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...nt from assistant manager does not only depends on read ability. There could be many se...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough situation, management the team etc. In the conclusion, the assumption made b...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 327.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1498470948 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5973764475 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504587155963 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8707541244 57.8364921388 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.70786347227 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199112986452 0.218282227539 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666380240122 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571501699003 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922240235472 0.128457276422 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729962701664 0.0628817314937 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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