The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"Jazz music is extremely popular in the city of Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,'
which airs every weeknight.Also, a number of well-known jazz musicians’ own homes in Monroe. Nevertheless, the nearest jazz club is over an hour away. Given the popularity of jazz in Monroe and
a recent nationwide study indicating that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment, we predict that our new jazz music club in Monroe will be a tremendously profitable
enterprise."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumption of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implication are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe. Author had made conclusion on the basis of nationwide study indicating that typical jazz fan spend close to $1000 per year on jazz entertainment, a jazz music club in Monroe would be tremendiously profitable.There are several unstated assumption made by author which need to be
taken in to account before argument come into fact.
Firstly, Author had made assumption that jazz music is extremely popular in the city of Monoroe because over 100000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer. It might possible that, Annual jazz festival program held in the summer in the month may or june, so that childeren has there holiday and person got leave, so that family visit in Jazz function.It might possiblity that jazz music program kept an free coupon for attraction, so that majority of people may visit program. People might be don't prefer to another music program because if it away from 65 to 70 Km, then people prefer to visit to jazz music which is located in same area.
Secondly, Author had made assumption that highest rated program in monroe is 'jazz Nightly', which airs every weeknight. Author need evidence such that amongst ration who really in 'Jazz Nightly' radio program, if ratio of office employee is more compared to other age group. Working person generally tired after his working hours of company so he may take rest instead of listeneing any radio program. author point may fail due to absence of evidences. In Next point author states that jazz musician have there own homes in Monoroe, they might work in different music orgaisation, indifferent cities.
Nationwide study indicating that the typical jazz fan spend to $1000 per year on jazz entertainment, so that a jazz music club in monroe would be tremendously profitable. Jazz music program held annually, whether people really spend $1000 on program. There might be difference in Monroe and other city, so nation wide study can't compare with Monroe. Even though $1000 ticket or price of show, so there might chance people aversion to word it.
considering above all point, author made several unstated assumption which need further evidences. Due to lack of evidences argument become weak arguments.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...onroe would be tremendiously profitable.There are several unstated assumption made by...
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Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...y profitable.There are several unstated assumption made by author which need to be taken...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sumption made by author which need to be taken in to account before argument come...
^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
..., so that family visit in Jazz function.It might possiblity that jazz music progra...
^^
Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...possiblity that jazz music program kept an free coupon for attraction, so that maj...
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Line 4, column 511, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ople may visit program. People might be dont prefer to another music program because...
^^^^
Line 6, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
...nstead of listeneing any radio program. author point may fail due to absence of eviden...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 503, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...t author states that jazz musician have there own homes in Monoroe, they might work in di...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 303, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...difference in Monroe and other city, so nation wide study cant compare with Monroe. Even th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 321, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oe and other city, so nation wide study cant compare with Monroe. Even though 000 ti...
^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...t chance people aversion to word it. considering above all point, author made several un...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 385.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03116883117 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61459762915 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524675324675 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.523282793 57.8364921388 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0625 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362079845274 0.218282227539 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122582764279 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137548251923 0.0701772020484 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161529714232 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141812605224 0.0628817314937 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...onroe would be tremendiously profitable.There are several unstated assumption made by...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...y profitable.There are several unstated assumption made by author which need to be taken...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sumption made by author which need to be taken in to account before argument come...
^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
..., so that family visit in Jazz function.It might possiblity that jazz music progra...
^^
Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...possiblity that jazz music program kept an free coupon for attraction, so that maj...
^^
Line 4, column 511, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ople may visit program. People might be dont prefer to another music program because...
^^^^
Line 6, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
...nstead of listeneing any radio program. author point may fail due to absence of eviden...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 503, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...t author states that jazz musician have there own homes in Monoroe, they might work in di...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 303, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...difference in Monroe and other city, so nation wide study cant compare with Monroe. Even th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 321, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oe and other city, so nation wide study cant compare with Monroe. Even though 000 ti...
^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Considering
...t chance people aversion to word it. considering above all point, author made several un...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 385.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03116883117 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61459762915 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524675324675 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.523282793 57.8364921388 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0625 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362079845274 0.218282227539 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122582764279 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137548251923 0.0701772020484 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161529714232 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141812605224 0.0628817314937 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.