The author of the argument claims that demolition the Rockingham’s old town hall and establishment of new building will be a prudent step to accommodate a large number of people and also help to generate some income.It might seem logical,at first glance, to concur with the argument but thorough assessment evinces some loopholes and assumptions on which the argument is based on.
First of all,the author claims that some citizens has proposed the idea of knocking down the century old town hall which is obviously has a profound cultural value. If some citizens agree,the number or the percentage value of the citizens are missing.Therefore, we can not refute the possibility of a decent number of citizens who do not want to tear down of such town hall imbued with historical value. Therefore this assumption is based on some statistical flaw.
Secondly,the author contends that the proposed new building will be energy efficient as it will be equipped with energy efficient cooler and heater.Moreover, he states that the new building will be able to accommodate more people.If more people starts dwelling that place,it would augment the expense of electricity instead of decreasing as he mentioned.Hence this claim is also based on some incoherent conjecture.
Finally,The passage is based on some ground which fails to substantiate the feasibility of such recommendations and its consequences.Therefore, this argument is flawed and unwarranted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: It
...e and also help to generate some income.It might seem logical,at first glance, to ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...nerate some income.It might seem logical,at first glance, to concur with the argume...
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Suggestion: , the
...he argument is based on. First of all,the author claims that some citizens has pr...
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Suggestion: , the
...d cultural value. If some citizens agree,the number or the percentage value of the c...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ntage value of the citizens are missing.Therefore, we can not refute the possibility of a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...town hall imbued with historical value. Therefore this assumption is based on some statis...
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...ed on some statistical flaw. Secondly,the author contends that the proposed new b...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...with energy efficient cooler and heater.Moreover, he states that the new building will b...
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Suggestion: If
...will be able to accommodate more people.If more people starts dwelling that place,...
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...f more people starts dwelling that place,it would augment the expense of electricit...
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Suggestion: Hence
...y instead of decreasing as he mentioned.Hence this claim is also based on some incohe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...y instead of decreasing as he mentioned.Hence this claim is also based on some incohe...
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Suggestion: , The
... on some incoherent conjecture. Finally,The passage is based on some ground which f...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ch recommendations and its consequences.Therefore, this argument is flawed and unwarrante...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 2260.96107784 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 441.139720559 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41760960346 2.78398813304 123% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 204.123752495 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 705.55239521 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.8473053892 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.472219123 57.8364921388 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.0 119.503703932 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 23.324526521 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5 5.70786347227 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254761347571 0.218282227539 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119338930506 0.0743258471296 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724442035811 0.0701772020484 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137018100341 0.128457276422 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740692505192 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 14.3799401198 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.3550499002 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.197005988 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.5979740519 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.1389221557 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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