Over the past year the Crust Copper Company CCC has purchased over 10 000 square miles of land in the tropical nation of West Fredonia Mining copper on this land will inevitably result in pollution and since West Fredonia is the home of several endangered

The Crust Copper Company (CCC) has invested in West Fredonia by buying huge lands with copper deposits. The company searching for copper deposits, is ready to mine the area irrespective of the fact that it could greatly affect the flora and fauna there. The land is a home to many endangered species; CCC's coper mining project there could lead to complete extinction of these species and cause a haphazard to the environmental balance of the tropical land. According to the author if the people simply refuse buying CCC's copper based product this could act as a potential solution to the crisis.
The provided argument seems to based on assumptions and unreal scenarios.
While it is true that the company would be affected if everyone around the world stops buying their products made out of copper, it still has a lot of questionable assumptions attached to it. The first being - it is difficult to make everyone boycott specific goods if it is economical or durable, many people tend to overlook the part were the product might be a substantial threat to environment. humans still using plastic in everyday life provides enough evidence to it. Even if we somehow cease manufacturing of it's products, CCC's might simply export their copper to other factories and get their desired profit out of it.
A possible solution to it would be raising awareness against the environmental crisis and urging people to demand no mining at all, explain the local or native population about the futuristic biological damage it could bring to the posterity, looking for greener alternatives in copper mining etc.
In a nutshell the author rightfully acknowledges the damage copper mining would bring to those lands and to those endangered species but the approach to tackle such an alarming situation is based on assumptions with no guaranteed outcome.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eatly affect the flora and fauna there. The land is a home to many endangered speci...
^^^
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Humans
...be a substantial threat to environment. humans still using plastic in everyday life pr...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, still, while, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 304.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72509316538 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2560772201 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.636363636 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.70786347227 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206583838689 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817758006348 0.0743258471296 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993747944641 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962258532254 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101403063353 0.0628817314937 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eatly affect the flora and fauna there. The land is a home to many endangered speci...
^^^
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Humans
...be a substantial threat to environment. humans still using plastic in everyday life pr...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, still, while, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 304.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72509316538 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2560772201 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.636363636 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.70786347227 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206583838689 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817758006348 0.0743258471296 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993747944641 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962258532254 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101403063353 0.0628817314937 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.