Three years ago, because of flooding at the Western Palean Wildlife Preserve, 100 lions and 100 western gazelles were moved to the East Palean Preserve, an area that is home to most of the same species that are found in the western preserve, though in larger numbers, and to the eastern gazelle, a close relative of the western gazelle. The only difference in climate is that the eastern preserve typically has slightly less rainfall. Unfortunately, after three years in the eastern preserve, the imported western gazelle population has been virtually eliminated. Since the slight reduction in rainfall cannot be the cause of the virtual elimination of western gazelle, their disappearance must have been caused by the larger number of predators in the eastern preserve.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author of the arguments concludes that the imported western gazelle population has been virtually eliminated because of the larger number of predators in the eastern preserve. There is no concrete evidence supporting the argument.
Firstly, the author of the argument assumes that the slightly less rainfall cannot be the cause of the virtual elimination of western gazelle. The author does not provide any evidence supporting the above assumption. The author states that the only difference in climate is that the eastern preserve typically has slightly less rainfall. The author does not tell who has found the difference in climate and the process followed to find the difference in climate in both areas. For instance, they be other differences in climate rather than slightly less rainfall which they might not have observed. There must be some proper evidence that the only difference is slightly less rainfall.
Secondly, the author claims that disappearance of the imported gazelle population must have been caused by the larger number of predators since reduction in rainfall cannot be the cause. The author does not take all factors into consideration. The author assume that the difference in climate and predation will only be the causes of their disappearance. The author must provide concrete evidence that they have examined all other factors which might cause their disappearance and they found predation to be the only cause for their disappearance.
Thirdly, the author does not tell if they found any reduction in the imported western gazelle population in first three years in the eastern preserve. If they found drastic reduction after three years in the eastern preserve and slight reduction or no reduction in first three years, then the author cannot claim the predation to be the cause for the virtual elimination of western gazelle. If the predation is the only cause for their disappearance, the author needs to answer why did they find virtual elimination after three years which is a long time. The author must provide evidence that there was reduction in first three years which led to their virtual disappearance after three years.
The argument is based on unwarranted assumptions. The author assumes that predation is the only cause of the virtual elimination of imported western gazelle population since slightly less rainfall cannot be the cause for the elimination. The author should provide concrete evidence which takes all factors into consideration for supporting the argument.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 400 350
No. of Characters: 2093 1500
No. of Different Words: 121 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.472 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.232 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.644 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.605 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.423 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e typically has slightly less rainfall. The author does not tell who has found the ...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assumes'.
Suggestion: assumes
... factors into consideration. The author assume that the difference in climate and pred...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y be the causes of their disappearance. The author must provide concrete evidence t...
^^^
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt is based on unwarranted assumptions. The author assumes that predation is the on...
^^^
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...annot be the cause for the elimination. The author should provide concrete evidence...
^^^
Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... author should provide concrete evidence which takes all factors into considerati...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 45.0 16.3942115768 274% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 400.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.335 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7263482903 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 204.123752495 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.32 0.468620217663 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3330875029 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.315789474 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101406179529 0.218282227539 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409139182206 0.0743258471296 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497148299122 0.0701772020484 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716625166097 0.128457276422 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443771394463 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.32208582834 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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