Three years ago, because of flooding at the Western Palean Wildlife Preserve, 100 lions and 100 western gazelles were moved to the East Palean Preserve, an area that is home to most of the same species that are found in the western preserve, though in larger numbers, and to the eastern gazelle, a close relative of the western gazelle. The only difference in climate is that the eastern preserve typically has slightly less rainfall. Unfortunately, after three years in the eastern preserve, the imported western gazelle population has been virtually eliminated. Since the slight reduction in rainfall cannot be the cause of the virtual elimination of western gazelle, their disappearance must have been caused by the larger number of predators in the eastern preserve.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
In the above argument the author has reached the conclusion that the almost complete elimination of the western gazelle is because of the larger number of predators in the eastern preserve. The author has reached these conclusion on the basis of a number of assumptions and has not provided any evidence to prove that his assumptions are true. If the evidence doesn't point in the direction of the conclusion drawn by the author, then it would weaken the argument significantly and prove the conclusion untrue. The following points will elaborate more on the specific evidence needed to evaluate the argument.
The author mentions that 100 lions and 100 western gazelles were moved to the east Palean Preserve from the Western Palean Preserve because of the flooding in the Western Palean Preserve. The author also mentions that the the Eastern Palean Preserve has a larger number of almost all of the same species as the Western Palean Preserve. But the author does not mention any numbers that would allow us to evaluate the population of the Eastern Palean Preserve after the addition of the 100 lions and the 100 gazelles. The number of animals was more than Western Preserve, but how much more is not mentioned. Without this number, it cannot be evaluated if the addition of the animals from the Western Preserve would disrupt the food chain or not. If the number of lions were more but the number was in lower hundreds only, then the addition of the 100 lions would have virtually doubled the number of predators but if the number was in thousands, then the addition of hundred more lions would not have had a huge effect on the ecosystem.
Furthermore, as the author mentioned that the almost the sane amount of species in larger numbers were present in the Eastern Palean Preserve. This means that the predators, that is, the lions had the same number of choices in their prey but in larger numbers. Even if the problemwas the increased number of predators, there should have been decrease in the number of all kinds of prey but only the number of western gazelles went down drastically. The author has not provided any evidence that the predators pefered the western gazelle as their prey which would explain why only they have been virtually eliminated.
The author has mentioned that a hundred western gazelles were moved from Western to Eastern Palean Preserve and their numbers drastically decreased in the three years. But the author has not given any information about the conditions of the western gazelle before they were moved. If the species was endangered and near extinction, then then the increased number of predators may have had nothing to do with the decrease in their numbers. If their number was decreasing since a long time before the move, the author hasn't specified about the rate with which the number was already decreasing. Without this evidence, we cannot say for sure that the increased number of predators caused the virtual elimination of the western gazelle.
In conclusion, the author has tried to discover the reason behind the decrease in the number of western gazelle but the author has not provided enough evidence to support his conclusion which leads the conclusion to be considered specious.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 548 350
No. of Characters: 2655 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.838 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.845 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.422 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 206 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 145 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.243 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.417 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this conclusion' or 'these conclusions'?
Suggestion: this conclusion; these conclusions
...astern preserve. The author has reached these conclusion on the basis of a number of assumptions...
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Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s assumptions are true. If the evidence doesnt point in the direction of the conclusio...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...looding in the Western Palean Preserve. The author also mentions that the the Easte...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...Preserve. The author also mentions that the the Eastern Palean Preserve has a larger nu...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...Preserve. The author also mentions that the the Eastern Palean Preserve has a larger nu...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... Preserve has a larger number of almost all of the same species as the Western Palean Pres...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the almost the'. Did you mean 'almost the'?
Suggestion: almost the
...rthermore, as the author mentioned that the almost the sane amount of species in larger number...
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Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: then
...ies was endangered and near extinction, then then the increased number of predators may h...
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Line 7, column 517, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...a long time before the move, the author hasnt specified about the rate with which the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2704.0 2260.96107784 120% => OK
No of words: 546.0 441.139720559 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49055697566 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.347985347985 0.468620217663 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 705.55239521 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0123316437 57.8364921388 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 23.324526521 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.70786347227 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293317355194 0.218282227539 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122561953219 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150051426125 0.0701772020484 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161787427023 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122026729032 0.0628817314937 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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