When selling a home it is important to sell house at right price and time.
The following letter from a homeowner to a friend on real estate firms is flawed for various reasons. The letter from the homeowner based his or her argument on assumptions that should be considered. The homeowner states that the Adams realty a better a real estate firm than Fitch realty.
First, the homeowner had an experience with Fitch realty 10 years ago. In ten years a lot of things can change. Ten years ago the economy was probably not as good as today, maybe it was during a recession. If the economy was not stable that could be a reason why people didn’t buy houses and why it took him 4 months to sell his house through Had the letter included a recent experience with Fitch realty, the argument could be stronger. Even then, it could be that that house the homeowner was selling was really old. Maybe the economy was good but the house she was selling was not what many people were looking for.
Furthermore, the letter to a friend could be a friend that may not necessarily be in an area that the Adams Realty has worked in the past. This could potentially delay the time it takes to sell the house and even the price. Perhaps the friend does not want to sell his or her home as soon as possible.
Lastly, the friend homeowner mentions that the Adams realty sold homes that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. This could be because the home that Fitch realty sold were in areas where homes were not as expensive as perhaps where Adams sold home. The location of homes depends on the prices.
It is also mentioned that revenue last year firm Adams was as twice as that of Fitch. A reason behind such significant difference could be due to having less employees and majority being part time. That does not necessarily mean that the service is less quality and that houses are not sold quickly.
In conclusion, because the homeowner makes several assumptions on the quality of work Fitch realty has, it fails to make a convincing case that Adams realty is better than Fitch realty when it comes to selling homes faster and pricier.
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 385 350
No. of Characters: 1712 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.43 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.447 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.22 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.694 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... assumptions that should be considered. The homeowner states that the Adams realty ...
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Line 10, column 154, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun employees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...icant difference could be due to having less employees and majority being part time....
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Line 10, column 188, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...aving less employees and majority being part time. That does not necessarily mean that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, may, really, so, then, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 384.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60416666667 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29658562992 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447916666667 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5947577875 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278586516496 0.218282227539 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927366105084 0.0743258471296 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10193599241 0.0701772020484 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141119047756 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690275694824 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.3799401198 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.3550499002 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.197005988 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.5979740519 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.32208582834 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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