Two years ago radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call in advice programs that it broadcast since that time its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly Given WCQP s recent succe
The station manager of KICK recommends to include more call-in advice programs in an attempt to gain larger audience share in its listening area. To corroborate his/her recommendation he/she tells that like two years ago,radio station WCQP in rockeville decided to increase significantly.Given WCQP's recent success with call-in advice programming,and citing a nation wide survey indicating that many radio listeners are quite interested in such programs. The recommendation is unconvincing since some critical question left unanswered .The same seriously undermines its credibility and invalidates the merit of the recommendation.
The first and foremost question that we need to be answered is that the station manager assumes that WCQP and KICK are roughly similar. This assumption is based on no solid evidence being provided to us .It is necessary for the author to provide further evidence because there is possibility that call-in advice programming in Medway may be not much popular as compare to in Rockville .Geographical factors such as audience ,region greatly affects this policy for example people in Medway do not like like the call-in advice programming like in Rockville which will be disastrous for the company to implement such programming in Medway.
Additionally the recommendation is based on the data of rockeville region of about two years ago . As we all know that two years time period is enough to change trend or mood of audience about any technique for example it may be possible that this programming technique implemented by the WCQP only for first two years or it may be possible that audience liked it for first two years and get tired of it after that .Implementing such programming after two years in Medway regoin can be disastrous for the KICK .Thus author should have provided more data on it.
Further ,answer is needed to the question that implementing this programming in Medway by KICK is profitable for radio station or not . As no evidence is provided by the author that this programming would be liked by audience of medway like in Rockville for example people of medway do not listen call-in programming ,thus implmenting such programming would be disastrous for the radio station .The nation wide survey stated by the author does not give us any statistics which proves that it will be profitable for KICK radio station to implement call-in programming.
Therefore by failing to answer critical question like mentioned above the argument exposes it's inherent fallacies .To fully appreciate the merit of this one need cogent answer to the questions posed above ,since the argument fails to deliver on this count we reject it in totality.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 438 350
No. of Characters: 2220 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.575 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.068 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.824 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 164 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 39.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 26.635 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.211 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommends including'.
Suggestion: recommends including
The station manager of KICK recommends to include more call-in advice programs in an atte...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , radio
...ion he/she tells that like two years ago,radio station WCQP in rockeville decided to i...
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Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n WCQP in rockeville decided to increase significantly.Given WCQPs recent success...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Given
...ille decided to increase significantly.Given WCQPs recent success with call-in advic...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... success with call-in advice programming,and citing a nation wide survey indicating ...
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Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...call-in advice programming,and citing a nation wide survey indicating that many radio liste...
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Line 1, column 536, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e some critical question left unanswered .The same seriously undermines its credib...
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...some critical question left unanswered .The same seriously undermines its credibili...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tes the merit of the recommendation. The first and foremost question that we nee...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...n no solid evidence being provided to us .It is necessary for the author to provi...
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...no solid evidence being provided to us .It is necessary for the author to provide...
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...ce being provided to us .It is necessary for the author to provide further eviden...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... much popular as compare to in Rockville .Geographical factors such as audience ,...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...much popular as compare to in Rockville .Geographical factors such as audience ,r...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Geographical
...ch popular as compare to in Rockville .Geographical factors such as audience ,region great...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aphical factors such as audience ,region greatly affects this policy for example ...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s policy for example people in Medway do not like like the call-in advice program...
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Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: like
...cy for example people in Medway do not like like the call-in advice programming like in ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...mplement such programming in Medway. Additionally the recommendation is based on the data...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rockeville region of about two years ago . As we all know that two years time peri...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...two years and get tired of it after that .Implementing such programming after two ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Implementing
...o years and get tired of it after that .Implementing such programming after two years in Med...
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Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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...ay regoin can be disastrous for the KICK .Thus author should have provided more da...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ave provided more data on it. Further ,answer is needed to the question that im...
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...K is profitable for radio station or not . As no evidence is provided by the autho...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing would be liked by audience of medway like in Rockville for example people of ...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...medway do not listen call-in programming ,thus implmenting such programming would ...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ould be disastrous for the radio station .The nation wide survey stated by the aut...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ld be disastrous for the radio station .The nation wide survey stated by the author...
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Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... argument exposes its inherent fallacies .To fully appreciate the merit of this on...
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Suggestion: To
...rgument exposes its inherent fallacies .To fully appreciate the merit of this one ...
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Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gent answer to the questions posed above ,since the argument fails to deliver on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 28.8173652695 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 16.3942115768 165% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 433.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21939953811 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9447226017 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448036951501 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 705.55239521 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.762011591 57.8364921388 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.0 119.503703932 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.3 23.324526521 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.70786347227 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.25449101796 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289844987141 0.218282227539 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125630979416 0.0743258471296 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762070474928 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165002358924 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100239086288 0.0628817314937 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 14.3799401198 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.3550499002 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.197005988 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 12.3882235529 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 11.9071856287 210% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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