The argument is specious on various grounds. Initially it presumes that Paleans did not travel to Lithos since no Palean boats were found. Secondly, it surmises that there was no exchange or communication between the two villages. Also it conjectures that the woven baskets originated in Palea.
Initially, the author believes that only through boats Palean people could have travelled across the river to Lithos. It disregards the fact that people from Lithos might have travelled to Palea. On the other hand, the author does not provide any information regarding Palean boats and that they could have been deteriorated over time if there were any.
More so, the fact that there could have been other means of communication or modes of exchange has not taken into account. Like they made the stuff float to the other side of the river or there were people who also knew how to make the same type of baskets.
The author’s also holds the mistaken belief that the woven baskets originally belonged to Palea. The Paleans could have acquired the art from neighboring villages or it might have actually originated in Lithos.
Since the argument has so many fallacies. It fails to make a cogent case that woven baskets were not uniquely Palean.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 209 350
we need to focus on two arguments:
The Brim River is very deep and broad, //maybe the Brim River was not very deep and broad at that time
and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. //well, maybe people from other villages may have boats.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 209 350
No. of Characters: 1010 1500
No. of Different Words: 110 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.833 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.367 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.354 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.357 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.041 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...communication between the two villages. Also it conjectures that the woven baskets o...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 55.5748502994 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 2260.96107784 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98564593301 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47687040877 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 204.123752495 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535885167464 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 705.55239521 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0724505026 57.8364921388 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1538461538 119.503703932 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 23.324526521 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.70786347227 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266976554797 0.218282227539 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884890196513 0.0743258471296 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569673052472 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139680716892 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043104490818 0.0628817314937 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 98.500998004 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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