Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author of the argument states that since, archaelogists have discovered a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brime river from Palea, so, the Palean baskets are not unique to Palean. However, the argument doesn't seems to be cogent.
First, author didn't considered the possibilty of alternate route to commute from Palea to Lithos or vice versa. The presence of alternate routes undermines the the claim that Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean. It is viable that people might have travelled from Palean to Lithos and could have sold the Palean baskets there. This vividly explains why a Palean basket was found in Lithos.
Furthermore, author states that since no Palean boats are not found in the the Brim river, so, no Paleans could have crossed it. The author neglects the fact that since river itself is very deep, so, searching anything in such a deep river is extremely arduous task. It is also be possible that people might have used boat to cross the river and then they stayed there only and never came back. The boat might have been destroyed and used for some other purposes like for lighting fire or something similar.
Also, presence of a Palean basket in Lithos cannot be taken as face value to reach to any conclusion. It may also be possible that if one go around and searches for Palean basket in nearby areas as well, he may find Palean basket there also. This pellucidly illuminate a possibility that Palean people might be transpoarting baskets to nearby regions for capital.
In a nutshell, presence of a Palean basket in Lithos in no way can be taken as base to reach to conclusion that Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: doesn't
...unique to Palean. However, the argument doesnt seems to be cogent. First, author di...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...presence of alternate routes undermines the the claim that Palean baskets were not uniq...
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Suggestion: the; the
...presence of alternate routes undermines the the claim that Palean baskets were not uniq...
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Suggestion: the
... since no Palean boats are not found in the the Brim river, so, no Paleans could have c...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
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...r is extremely arduous task. It is also be possible that people might have used bo...
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Suggestion: as well
...s well, he may find Palean basket there also. This pellucidly illuminate a possibili...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276923076923 0.25644967241 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.16 0.15541462614 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0553846153846 0.0836205057962 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0769230769231 0.0520304965353 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0215384615385 0.0272364105082 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12 0.125424944231 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0461538461538 0.0416121511921 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47509593372 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338461538462 0.026700313972 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0953846153846 0.113004496875 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0307692307692 0.0255425247493 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00307692307692 0.0127820249294 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1701.0 2731.13054187 62% => OK
No of words: 290.0 446.07635468 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86551724138 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365517241379 0.378187486979 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2 0.287650121315 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134482758621 0.208842608468 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0724137931034 0.135150697306 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47509593372 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 207.018472906 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.469332199767 109% => OK
Word variations: 50.5730422447 52.1807786196 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7142857143 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1379037533 57.7814097925 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 141.986410481 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 23.2022227129 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.724660767414 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.58251231527 251% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.7142857143 51.9672348444 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.71428571429 1.8405768891 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353185817842 0.441005458295 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14676391722 0.135418324435 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0611048974523 0.0829849096947 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.608719506665 0.58762219726 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170207659425 0.147661913831 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15288570202 0.193483328276 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724790370961 0.0970749176394 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.367497434904 0.42659136922 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132478782377 0.0774707102158 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228944067794 0.312017818177 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848635153352 0.0698173142475 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.82512315271 104% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.82389162562 142% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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