If everyone would closely examine their past, they would realize that only a few individuals have played a role in shaping their behaviour and their way of thinking.
All we know that every creature achieve their attribute by born except human being. A mankind has to do work hard to be a human being and this is very much important for a human society to achieve the humanity. Otherwise the society will be destroyed. Behavior and the way of thinking are the most important things for human race and very few are really concern for these by this time.
A good behaviour and a better mentality can change this world. We can build heaven in this earth by a good behaviour. Suppose, a person cannot see, and then if we have the mentality to help him ,it will be good for him and also for our society. Once i saw an advertisement for this regard; a boy saw an old lady couldnot cross the road, he helped her; after that when the boy had just fallen from his bicycle a man came to help him. The man was a menial worker and when he just start to clean the road the basket of garbage fall over the road and a passerby came to him to help him. Thus we can understand that, good behaviour is just like a spreading thing, if you express it, other will also expose it before you. This is a chain reaction.
But to create this cycle, at first, we have to build our behaviour to do this type of job and reshaping our mentality. We, human being are very much self-oriented creature; we cannot think anything without us or cannot do any work without any benefit. Where a very little consideration will solve everything, we cannot do that for our ego problem. For this, we have to build our behaviour to be good.
Our world is very beautiful place and with our existence we can make it more beautiful; only a few works we have to do; to make our mentality, the way of thinking better. Who is better in mentality can be a better human being. The human history also shows various examples of this situation. So, it is our duty to rearrange our bahaviour and mentality for betterment.
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Sentence: All we know that every creature achieve their attribute by born except human being.
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