The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The man of today is living his life at a pace much higher than any of his ancestors. The pace of human life is at an all time high as compared to any other period in the brief human history. This rapid pace is the result of the rapid rate of development in almost every area of human endavour. The high rate of development in different fields of endavour has spurred competition in each of these fields. This increased competition is the major reason for the higher pace of life in modern times. On one hand this high pace has provided rapid advancements in many fields, however this has also result...
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Sentence: On one hand this high pace has provided rapid advancements in many fields, however this has also resulted in general deteoration of human health.
Error: deteoration Suggestion: deterioration
Sentence: Such a phenomenon is a direct result of the modern competetive age.
Error: competetive Suggestion: competitive
Sentence: Most of thses evils of modern times can be attributed to the contemporary life- style which goes on at such a rapid pace that people do not get enough time to relax.
Error: thses Suggestion: these
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