A nation should require all of its students to study the national curriculum until they enter college.
Students in a nation needs to study the same curriculum untill they enter college, this will help them to have a special knowledge on a particular subject that will help them to do well in college. According to David Mark " Curriculum is very important in a country if students in all schools are to use one curriculum vitae to serve as a buster in their academic field." What is the role of curriculum in the lives of students if they study a particular curriculum? Should it serve as a guidean? If yes, then how is it going to put into action?
The most important thing is that students in a country needs to study atlist a curriculum until they are in higher institution, it will actually lead to foster their knowledge on academic field. For example, in China, recently they call for a major need for schools to offer the same subjects for pupils in high schools and even in nusery schools to. How will this help the students? From the president's policy, he mention that this role will encourage and stand as a basis for schools to lead their citizens in a useful and successful outcome.
It is paramount for students who are still in high school to learn a particular curriculum. In this case, it enhances their knowled and they are liable to comprehend any given question at the time of college. Their are several ways in which a country can administer schools and facilitate more useful subjects that will help to build the future generation. For example in India, the government is working towards its national curriculum to ensure that its citizens know the importants of serving the nation and that's is included in the schools curriculum as part of the subjects to be taught.
The need for government to foster curriculum in alls schools is an epitome of success. The level of courses that are taught is schools will tell how the future will be like in a particular country. For example, in Egypt, the minister of educatio has mandated every school in egyt to handle a particular subject that will lead the students into a higher level of academic known as its "zenith". The importance of students having one course at a time before entering college serves as a base. However, curriculum that is handled carefully in a country will also help to preserve its culture in the lives of the students.
In conclusion, curriculum can help to improve greater knowlege in students academic lives if the ministry of education and the government will encourage curriculums to be as the same in all schools. That is a good reason that helps knowledge to permeate in students lives, and greater rulers will be produced,only the future will tell.
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Sentence: From the president's policy, he mention that this role will encourage and stand as a basis for schools to lead their citizens in a useful and successful outcome.
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Sentence: The level of courses that are taught is schools will tell how the future will be like in a particular country.
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Sentence: Students in a nation needs to study the same curriculum untill they enter college, this will help them to have a special knowledge on a particular subject that will help them to do well in college.
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Sentence: The most important thing is that students in a country needs to study atlist a curriculum until they are in higher institution, it will actually lead to foster their knowledge on academic field.
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Sentence: For example, in China, recently they call for a major need for schools to offer the same subjects for pupils in high schools and even in nusery schools to.
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Sentence: In this case, it enhances their knowled and they are liable to comprehend any given question at the time of college.
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Sentence: For example in India, the government is working towards its national curriculum to ensure that its citizens know the importants of serving the nation and that's is included in the schools curriculum as part of the subjects to be taught.
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Sentence: The need for government to foster curriculum in alls schools is an epitome of success.
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Sentence: For example, in Egypt, the minister of educatio has mandated every school in egyt to handle a particular subject that will lead the students into a higher level of academic known as its 'zenith'.
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Sentence: In conclusion, curriculum can help to improve greater knowlege in students academic lives if the ministry of education and the government will encourage curriculums to be as the same in all schools.
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