As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
i believe that As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will thrive. because technology usage save our precious time , which can be sacred for other useful purposes rather than spending on tedious things.
"more advancement of technology , more life easier , more practical we will." take an instance of physicist ,whose purpose is to do research in physics but inexorably they have to tackle math complex calculations . if they spend there valuable time for doing that complex calculations , denouement will not be fruitless .because they are expected to do tackle with verifications of physics theories and concepts for which those calculations result is imperative but already they spent their precious time for solving complex calculations . now with advancement of technology we have scientific calculators which can make those tedious calculations fractions of seconds . with usage of scientific calculators it did nothing but it saved time which will thrive physicist ability of thinking.
technology is produced by men , not men are produced by technology . if a men which have intellectual power to introduce technology , they introduced and if they rely on technology then it is not deteriorate for ability of humans to think . take an instance of NASA scientists who are working for understanding of other planets . because they have scientific thinking they are successful in making abstract theories then they will send their advance satellites to gather glean information about planet .and then satellites will transmit the results to them . then they will examine that was actual result verifies the validity of their theories.so here technology plays an role of helpful medium , it did not make any theories but it provided verifications to abstract theories. this new information will be thriving for us.
lack of rely on technology will be deteriorate for human thinking. take an example of stephan hawking which is renowned physicist in world . he has written a book " Brief History Of Universe " in which he assumed theories for creation of black hole and universe but we do not have that much advance technology to verify his theories . may be they are true , if they are then it will give clear understanding of creation of universe , for which we are struggling for so much time . yet we do not know.
so the examples of stephan hawking , NASA scientists , physicist illustrates that As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will thrive . these reasons clearly support my reasoning.
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Sentence: Because technology usage save our precious time, which can be sacred for other useful purposes rather than spending on tedious things.
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Sentence: Because they are expected to do tackle with verifications of physics theories and concepts for which those calculations result is imperative but already they spent their precious time for solving complex calculations.
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Sentence: Now with advancement of technology we have scientific calculators which can make those tedious calculations fractions of seconds.
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Sentence: May be they are true, if they are then it will give clear understanding of creation of universe, for which we are struggling for so much time.
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