1. College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
students tend to choose courses based on availability of jobs in the respective field rather than on their interest. However they end up dropping out of college or gain negligible knowledge due to their lack of interest. Hence students should prefer to pursue subjects that interest them.
students who pursue subjects they are interested in end up excelling in those particular areas. they try to give their best and can create inventions that may help mankind. For example Elon Musk has invested much of his time on self driving cars though the self driving cars market was very immature. But he was able to establish a billion dollar company Tesla which produces self driving cars. Another instance is Curie was able to discover radium out of her interest in chemical research. radium is now used in many areas like on vehicles and roads to prevent accidents , to make objects visible in the dark.
Other reason could be students who takeup subjects without interest may end up dropping out of college and it could ruin their education. Studies reveal that sixty percent of people who pursue courses based on job availability without interest have dropped out of college or have not passed in their exams.
interest is the key driving force for students to excel in their careers. it is evident that students should be encouraged to pursue courses they are interested in.
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs 33
- Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling reaso 33
- CLAIM The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in today s times REASON Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs 33
- 1 College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...up excelling in those particular areas. they try to give their best and can create i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98706896552 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43463801933 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581896551724 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3117006809 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221358672224 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091649479236 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810439965291 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157554751906 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609958457017 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.