1. In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
knowledge is a God-given gift and does not differentiate a beginner with an expert. there are situations where a young kid of 12 has an IQ level far greater than an adult could own. On the contrary, experience makes a man perfect which a beginner fails to have. Moreover we could even find the coalescing of the beginner and the expert to come out with an innovative discovery. Each of the above views would be discussed in detail below and hence a conclusion could be arrived based on the amalgamation of the three views.
First of all, let us consider the ability of an experienced person. he is shrewd and canny because the several years spent in a particular field gives him the insight to do things rightly. For instance, at the school and college level, teachers and professors with a minimum of 5 years of teaching experience are alone allowed for valuation. The reason behind this is that, to gain thoroughness of a subject, at least a few years of teaching and learning are required. Similarly, in the political scenario, one can notice that the parliamentary members are aged people mostly above 50 years of age, who have been in the field as ministers for many years gathering information and the audacity to rule the country and to try to make the nation a better place for the citizens to live peacefully and happily.
On the other hand, contemporaries in the field of latest technologies are just beginners. For instance, Zuckerberg found the recent trending social site Facebook during his college days. Most of the entrepreneurs are young and energetic lad who are fresh out of studies with the hope of setting up businesses by putting their new ideas. Also, the boy kutraleeswaran who won accolades for swimming, was just 13 years old. Tendulkar became a famous batsman and was known to the entire world when he was a very young player. In spite of their victory at an early stage, age was never a barrier for them to outshine others. they continued to be famous personalities till the end.
Nevertheless there are instances where a beginner and an expert both have an equal role to play. Much of it could be noticed in the field of research and scientific discoveries. A professor and a student join hands and try to improve the inventions made in the human society. even in the olden ages, people used to work together without caring for their age. it was only the knowledge and the hard work they shared that bonded them together.
To end, we can say that there are chances of a student outsmarting their seniors. At the same time, nothing could match the ability gained through experience. thus, there could be no question of whether an individual is a beginner or an expert. only the best has to be looked for and so the demands to be met. thus in any field of inquiry, both the beginner and an expert are equally likely to make important contributions. The outcome of a discovery only praises the person behind it and not their age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Knowledge
knowledge is a God-given gift and does not differ...
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...ifferentiate a beginner with an expert. there are situations where a young kid of 12 ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...perfect which a beginner fails to have. Moreover we could even find the coalescing of th...
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...r the ability of an experienced person. he is shrewd and canny because the several...
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Suggestion: of the latest
...other hand, contemporaries in the field of latest technologies are just beginners. For in...
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... a barrier for them to outshine others. they continued to be famous personalities ti...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... famous personalities till the end. Nevertheless there are instances where a beginner an...
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...e inventions made in the human society. even in the olden ages, people used to work ...
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... individual is a beginner or an expert. only the best has to be looked for and so th...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ooked for and so the demands to be met. thus in any field of inquiry, both the begin...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...ooked for and so the demands to be met. thus in any field of inquiry, both the begin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, as to, at least, for instance, first of all, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2448.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68965517241 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6902445567 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54214559387 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8467083999 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13726952181 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366646458568 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524693958575 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770779249319 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334662517695 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.