1. The true test of the greatness of a work of art is its ability to be understood by the masses.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The main aim of an artist is to think creatively and project it to the society, so as to receive the accolades from the people. In order to be the best, an art work must be very lucid so as to attract greater portion of the population towards its work. Thus, I agree with the fact that if an art must be the appreciated, it must be understandable by the greater portion of the society.
Firstly, consider the work of a literature created by an artist. The main idea of the artist is to project his/her idea to the public so that they can understand the way in which the artist is perceive the things. However, if the person uses the critical language which might be understood only by a sector of people, the art work fails to burgeon profoundly in the wider sections of the society. The same case has happened in the recently published literature work by a naive author, Daween. Hence, one of the most important criteria of an art must be to make the work as simple as possible.
Secondly, as most of the people believe that an art is the best way to project wide range of ideas in a short framework, the important theme of the art must be its ability to reach out even to such sections of the society where a person does not have any basic knowledge of art. For instance, most of the artistic works will be displayed in the museums where people get attracted from various parts of the world. All of them might not come from the same background and sector. So there must not be jargons which will be understood only by a few set of people.
Despite all the above mentioned criticalities, there will be some works for which the audience must get a prior knowledge of basics in order to understand the art. For instance, consider an artwork which has been portrayed recently at the Mumbai art exhibition by the famous artist Leo. He has done the painting in such a way that the audience must have the knowledge of the subtle differences between Violet and Purple colors in order to perceive the art in correct manner. As most of the people unaware of that fact, could not appreciate the art.
In conclusion, an art work which is mostly accepted in the wider range of people, in most of the cases is the one which is lucid in nature so that it can be perceived by wider range of people. Though if some art works are typically critical to understand, it is the job of the artist to provide the people basic knowledge of the jargons in order to understand the art.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...eatively and project it to the society, so as to receive the accolades from the people. ...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...he best, an art work must be very lucid so as to attract greater portion of the populati...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...he population towards its work. Thus, I agree with the fact that if an art must be the appreciated, it m...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'perceived'.
Suggestion: perceived
...derstand the way in which the artist is perceive the things. However, if the person uses...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun set seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sets'.
Suggestion: few sets
...gons which will be understood only by a few set of people. Despite all the above me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42450765864 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46962499932 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400437636761 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3856514222 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218096317767 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826518050609 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597523882159 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147580367849 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194298372433 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.