5. Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The author of the issue claim that it's incumbent upon the governments to patronize their major cities in order to be successful in every facet. He further reasons that culture and civilization or even customs and tradition of a country are maintained and stem from main cities. Personally, I refute the rationale behind both the claim and the reason.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that every nation consist of majorities of city, which play an important role in every single facet of a country. Broadly speaking, although major cities need to be saturated when it comes to budget allocation, there are many different cities that government should provide an opportunity for them to reach their pinnacle of day. To elucidate more on the issue, if government favoritism between cities in case of financial support, it might bring negative consequences and government will run into a huge problem. As a matter of fact, government should strike a balance between cities in order to enrich the country and provide fertile ground for all people to flourish in their life.
Furthermore, governments will not be able to take advantage of many potentials in other cities if they do not take them into consideration. For example, oil and gas are of the two utmost important invests in every given society, but it goes without saying that they are not always located in major cities. In this case, not until government investment identically on every city can a nation progress. As a corollary, every city need to be thrived because all cities in all around the world whether big or small confront trials and tribulations. As far as I am concerned, disesteem by governments could threatened significant potential in every city and terminate its resources.
As far as the reason is concerned, it should be pointed out that culture and civilization are the symbol of every nation and people in all around the world recognize that nation with its customs and tradition. Actually, different culture such as dances, artifacts and so forth, in a country came from different tribes, which have settled in various part of a country. To delve further into the issue, lifestyle has changed in major cities and hardly do they preserve their culture. As a matter of fact, government should dedicate same amount of money to the cities in order to enrich the culture and civilization. If government do not reverse such a trend culture, custom or even history of a nation will terminated as soon as possible.
Having discussed both the claim and reason, I reiterate that governments should strike a balance when it comes to financial support. In fact, governments should put all cities in their first priority when it comes to culture and customs. Indeed, every city has brilliant potential, which can influence greatly the future of a country. Also, many people firmly believe that whole countries in the globe known with their culture and civilization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t comes to budget allocation, there are many different cities that government should provide a...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'threaten'
Suggestion: threaten
...ncerned, disesteem by governments could threatened significant potential in every city and...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry city and terminate its resources. As far as the reason is concerned, it shou...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'terminate'
Suggestion: terminate
...custom or even history of a nation will terminated as soon as possible. Having discuss...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n will terminated as soon as possible. Having discussed both the claim and reas...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn with their culture and civilization.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25974025974 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.124304267161 0.157235817809 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0723562152134 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0500927643785 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0463821892393 0.0444667217837 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148423005566 0.12292977631 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0296846011132 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75213269774 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278293135436 0.030933414821 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00185528756957 0.0016655270985 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.0946196660482 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0241187384045 0.0249443105267 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012987012987 0.0148568991511 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2962.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 491.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03258655804 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382892057026 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26883910387 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179226069246 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140529531568 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75213269774 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 219.290929204 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470468431772 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 53.9601248549 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.380952381 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2901160419 59.4972553346 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.047619048 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.380952381 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.674092028746 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 50.2648627679 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.98319327731 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445344251856 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.096415243191 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0738967316924 0.077325440228 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523630266764 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.092017256754 0.149214159877 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180957849752 0.161403998019 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859687740375 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393094264331 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0206580837829 0.0692045440612 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330353901464 0.275328986314 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358560190633 0.0653680567796 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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