"An ailing patient must have easy access to his doctor's record of similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access the ailing patient may better determine whether that doctor is competent to treat that medical condition".

The author claims that patient should have access to his/her doctor's records of other patients who have the same ailments, in such way he/she could be able to evaluate whether the doctor is competent and successful in treating that medical conditions. As far as I concern I totally disagree with this suggestion. In the following passages I will explain my position and discuss my point of view.

The first point I would like to highlight, having the same disease does not necessarily mean that patients are similar in other aspects and have the same physical and medical conditions. Even...

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Sentence: The autor claims that patient should have access to his/her doctor's records of other patients who have the same ailments, in such way he/she could be able to evaluate whether the doctor is competent and successful in treating that medical conditions.
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